Friday 16 April 2010
Monday 22 March 2010
Inspiration For Double Page Spread.
Mock Up Feedback From Teachers & Peers
Self Assesment- I Love My Front Cover! Although i dont think my masthead stands out and neither does the text / fotn I've chosen. For my conetnts page i just genreally dont like it, i think the backgrounds dull and dargs the picture down, although the cutting out is well done. My double Page Spread Would Not Upload onto my blog, but i think the article is good which is an interview, but my layout and photos need to change.
Kam Singh-
Kam agreed and said he liked my front cover as it was different but wasnt too keen on my DPS, he liked my shots, thought the picture did fit with the genre, my english and use of words was good and effective, thought id varied my size of my texts well. He didnt like my DPS but though the article was good, and thinks that the tyres on my front cover are abit out of place although it is an effective photo.
Louise Smith- Louise said that she loved my front cover photo and loved the DPS article, but thinks that my contents page let me down which i also agree with, she liked my photos and liked the outfits and colour used as it goes well withy my theme of pop, but thinks to get better marks i should try and use more varied shots, which i now intend on doing so.
Teachers- Overall My Teachers Belived That My Photographs Were Good But Too Raunchy & Suggestive For A Pop Magazine, Which Reflecting Upon Them I Do Agree With Some Of Them. My Masthead Needs To Stan Out More, Which I Have Now Done By Using A Creative & Bold Text. My Exclusive Interview Also Needs To Stand Out Alot More Too. My Colour Use And Range Of Skills And Use Of Photoshop However Is Good.
Kam Singh-
Kam agreed and said he liked my front cover as it was different but wasnt too keen on my DPS, he liked my shots, thought the picture did fit with the genre, my english and use of words was good and effective, thought id varied my size of my texts well. He didnt like my DPS but though the article was good, and thinks that the tyres on my front cover are abit out of place although it is an effective photo.
Louise Smith- Louise said that she loved my front cover photo and loved the DPS article, but thinks that my contents page let me down which i also agree with, she liked my photos and liked the outfits and colour used as it goes well withy my theme of pop, but thinks to get better marks i should try and use more varied shots, which i now intend on doing so.
Teachers- Overall My Teachers Belived That My Photographs Were Good But Too Raunchy & Suggestive For A Pop Magazine, Which Reflecting Upon Them I Do Agree With Some Of Them. My Masthead Needs To Stan Out More, Which I Have Now Done By Using A Creative & Bold Text. My Exclusive Interview Also Needs To Stand Out Alot More Too. My Colour Use And Range Of Skills And Use Of Photoshop However Is Good.
Wednesday 17 March 2010
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